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LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296


0 posted 2007-06-06 09:00 AM



I'm not sure what to say
don't exactly know why
let me keep your thoughts
never
discounting their sad why's

join me in a good laugh
press your soul up good and tight
discounting any side effect
read me your poem this night

we can munch on phenomenon
arpegio of powers
infinity dares ownership
former splendour a verse
of no regret

all those
tender years
exorcise celestial forms
endless fevor
now in grey hair shores

luminous transfigurations
oh
bless
this
wretched brow

my human mind's at will
kindly led me to confess
in the name of justice
shed not one tear of force
or apologize
for being real

I am the rumor
that scapes blame
loving my misfortune
bridal robes remain

were I no longer silent
to a maiden pure
crawling neath my eyelids
great friend of harmony

mary be her general inclination
into the wider brain

a river where dew doth fall
predisposition
or'r heaven's immense space
fulfilling the promise
in the palm of God's hand
on a shore of blossomed faith
a gradual but steady progress

© Copyright 2007 Lee J. - All Rights Reserved
JL
Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
1 posted 2007-06-06 09:44 AM


"a river where dew doth fall
predisposition
or'r heaven's immense space
fulfilling the promise
in the palm of God's hand
on a shore of blossomed faith
a gradual but steady progress"

Always a blessing to read what you have to say LeeJ, always.

JL

"The man who reads nothing at all is better educated than the man who reads nothing but newspapers."
~Thomas Jefferson


miscellanea
Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060
OH
2 posted 2007-06-06 10:38 AM


Lee,

   "luminous transfigurations
oh
bless
this
wretched brow

my human mind's at will
kindly led me to confess
in the name of justice
shed not one tear of force
or apologize
for being real"


Had an awful evening last night-these words are just what I needed to read!  Thanks, Sweet Lee J.  Your writing is awesome.

misc

Robert Jordan
Member
since 2007-02-07
Posts 392
Philadelphia Pa USA
3 posted 2007-06-06 10:39 AM


LeeJ,

Yowl, this works for me kid.  Good Poem.

Bobby

LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

4 posted 2007-06-06 10:48 AM


JL

you know I love you and your smiles you send along, thank you so much.  Your the bestest friend a body could have....hugs

Misc...you are a marvelous sight for sore eyes...where have you been...I'm so so sorry for your evening's wear...wishing you the best of all days ahead...thank you hun for reading

Robert...what can I say, your comments surely bless me...thank you for stopping by


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