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My Own Thinking Room
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My Own Thinking Room |
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Joty Junior Member
since 2007-05-03
Posts 15Florida |
MY OWN THINKING ROOM Out over the water A long wooden pier, My space at the end I feel safe out here. The Pelicans and Seagulls Above me they loom, I watch them with wonder From My own Thinking Room. I know we all have them A place of our own, Where no one can find us Our own safety zone. As the sun starts to set And the gulls they still loom, I still watch them with wonder From My own Thinking Room. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Joty~ I like this ... reminded me of what I refer to as My Meadow of Poetic Thought~ I love the water too ... and you've transported me there with your descriptive penning~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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ladylisa Member
since 2007-04-29
Posts 342Florida USA |
Applause to you my friend. This perfectly describes my own space. Great poem, great depth. |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Oh, I like this too Thank you for sharing your thinking room and letting us in to look around Good work. A |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I hate to tell you but I think we both share that same room.  Nicely written. |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
Well done!!! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
love your thinking room may I please come along? lovely vision |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Joty, This is great! Yes, I think we all have them (or at least, need to have a thinking room all of our own). My thinking room is more like a thinking tub! Would one call that a think tank? A long soak does one good now and then. Enjoyed your wonderful poem and am clcking it to my library. Nice write! miscellanea |
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Joty Junior Member
since 2007-05-03
Posts 15Florida |
Wow...Thank you all very much...I know I am going to like it here.... |
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RogueandPoet Member
since 2007-06-04
Posts 126Oregon |
A room with a view!!! very nice poem. |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
I have that view from Anna Maria Island, looking out over the Gulf. I go there and make it a place of my own also. nice write bernie  A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
love this poem and feel it deeply. And Bslicker...I love Anna Maria Island. My name for heaven... martyjo |
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The Phat Whale New Member
since 2007-06-09
Posts 9 |
Wow, I think everyone can relate. |
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