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The call of intent
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The call of intent |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa 
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Down at the root of inception in the deep and dark underground love spirals and sinks and turns away from the call of intent. Loud, too loud, the ears shut down but the hum in the way of all hums carries the tune of what should be done along every step of the way. No skip and jump can clear the hump of unending procrastination and love in this slump a blight on the smooth movement of life. Intention and deed like spice in a stew; eat and be satisfied or suck on a thumb after twiddling is done and fade into the lost forgotten. Love spirals and sinks and turns; one day intent will be heard and the weapons of soul destruction will implode with the force of action. One day, one day; there’s no stew today because I’m not cooking for you! Helen / 5 June 2007 |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Helen~ I REALLY like the zinger of 'suck on a thumb after twiddling is done' Let's  this baby up to the top~*Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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ladylisa Member
since 2007-04-29
Posts 342Florida USA |
Loved it !!!!!! Great mystery in it's own form. Loved reading in between the lines of this piece.  |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"Intention and deed like spice in a stew; eat and be satisfied or suck on a thumb after twiddling is done and fade into the lost forgotten." Helen, my friend, your wit is in rare form in this one. Loved it! *hugs*...jo |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
interesting and beautifully penned. enjoyed |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Thank you all so much for your comments. I appreciate them one and all. Helen |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
No skip and jump can clear the hump of unending procrastination and love in this slump a blight on the smooth movement of life. you are indeed deeply moved to write, and you must write... I think sometime you write like a man feels.... and that's a good thing!!!!!!!! |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
As a man feels, LeeJ? What an interesting comment - thank you, I think. |
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