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Open Poetry #40

happily ever after

Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

0 posted 2007-06-04 08:21 PM

blades of grass
flatten beneath our feet
as we walk
hand in hand
down the road of cliches
and promised tomorrows
The future so bright in your eyes
as I cry and laugh
I bathe beneath your smile
as "I love you" falls from your mouth
I catch it on my tongue
savoring your taste
I've never been
in a real relationship before
I have to pinch myself
everytime you look into my eyes
and tell you
to remind me
that I do deserve you
It's weird
yet comforting
to know
that
I know
that you know
it's just right
and meant to be
despite my weird insecurities
I don't believe in
Prince Charming
But I do believe in
living happily ever after
with you...

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

Robert Jordan
Member

since 2007-02-07

Posts 392
Philadelphia Pa USA

1 posted 2007-06-04 10:06 PM

Ceinwyn,

There is lovely thinking behind this poem. I like it very much.

Bobby

ladylisa
Member

since 2007-04-29

Posts 342
Florida USA

2 posted 2007-06-06 07:39 PM

Oh, I really liked this walk. Very romantic and from the heart. Really enjoyed it and hope to read more of your work. I still believe this path exists. Thanks

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2007-06-08 10:38 AM

"I bathe beneath your smile
as "I love you" falls from your mouth
I catch it on my tongue
savoring your taste"

~ Kris, those lines were incredibly intimate ~ and ROMANTIC. I do so enjoy your creative expressions of love! You have a style that is uniquely yours ~ and I love it!

What a lover-ly poem! Happiness looks good on you!

Loving hug,
Linda

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2007-06-08 02:21 PM

I like this one

though I think I've snagged me a frog...a big warty one LOL

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2007-06-09 05:12 AM

Nice...James

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