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Forever in Love
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since 2007-05-31
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0 posted 2007-06-02 02:21 AM



Sitting here thinking of you is all I can seem to do
In the silence, memories arise and love warms my heart
Distance is blocked to sight but not of feeling
this feeling is real, is pure, is true
My love is greater in each day we push through
When you are in the silence of the day, think of me
For I am thinking of you
Silence is a place we can be together
In my heart do I feel your presence in the silence of the day
** I wrote this today and it goes out to my hubby*

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aziza
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
1 posted 2007-06-02 02:28 AM


He will treasure every word that you write to him.  Keep it up -- I find writing to be my release ~ it often soothes me.

Thank you for sharing this with us.

A

Forever in Love
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since 2007-05-31
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2 posted 2007-06-02 02:44 AM


aziza thanks for all your comments. You've been real supportive. Thanks alot


JL
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since 2004-04-01
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3 posted 2007-06-02 08:59 AM


"Silence is a place we can be together
In my heart do I feel your presence in the silence of the day"

Heartfelt sentiment.  
Nice write.  
(Expand more on the emotion the emptiness of
silence, yet the necessity to be part of it).
Enjoyed "In Silence"

JL

"The man who reads nothing at all is better educated than the man who reads nothing but newspapers."
~Thomas Jefferson


passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
4 posted 2007-06-02 11:39 AM


silence is a good place to be sometimes

I try to go there as much as I can

nice poem

paullallady
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since 2007-04-03
Posts 262
Michigan
5 posted 2007-06-02 01:40 PM


Emotions are the strongest memories.
Beautiful.

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