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Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
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Los Angeles California

0 posted 2007-06-01 03:25 PM


“Dad,
my girl wants me to get the moon for her”
What?

“I tried last night,
The hole was too big in your net
Whenever I wanted to scoop it up
The light just leaked through
With all my sweat.”

I tell you how to get that.

Have a heart shaped pie tin
And a piece of foil in larger size  
Put it at the bottom of the pool
And have her stand by

When you see moon swim in
Tell her to cover it and quickly tie
Then, my son, you caught it
The heart shaped light.

But don’t forget
Never open it
Cause it would fly
Invisibly high

“Dad, we caught it
after many tries.
she is happy now"

[This message has been edited by Drauntz (06-01-2007 05:36 PM).]

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2007-06-02 09:28 PM



JamesMichael
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2 posted 2007-06-03 12:47 PM


Nice...James
MindBodySoul
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since 2007-01-10
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NJ
3 posted 2007-06-04 11:06 PM


So sweet!

Made me smile
Thanks

Jen--->MindBodySoul

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