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Forever in Love
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since 2007-05-31
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0 posted 2007-05-31 11:22 PM


who is anybody really?
what makes up each personality?
who's wretched mind twisted first
situations scream attention
captions of what you've shown me
is what i'm left to believe
what is my purpose, why am i here
Am i earths playtoy of wretched existance
laughing with a mocking crowd
who are we really, do they decide
dreams aren't always what they seem to be
crushed as easily as a wondering ant
are aspirations really what they seem to be
what are we really hoping for
are you smiling for a reason, or is it what
they decide?


      
    
  
** This is about 3 years old ( this is some of my old poetry)**
  





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aziza
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since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
1 posted 2007-05-31 11:32 PM


Dunno the answers but I sure do like the questions.  

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JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
2 posted 2007-06-02 04:49 PM


3 years old?  Great write.
I really enjoy these types of probing questions.

"The man who reads nothing at all is better educated than the man who reads nothing but newspapers."
~Thomas Jefferson


Mr»ÄlleÿÇät
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since 2001-06-02
Posts 190

3 posted 2007-06-02 05:39 PM


Gr8 Questions!
I always like poems that make you think.

Another question may be...
How many are ready to live the answer?

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