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Forever in Love
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since 2007-05-31
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0 posted 2007-05-31 11:19 PM



Everytime I think of you I feel a presense
of happiness, my heart opens up to you, will
you be willing to accept? circumstances are
not the best, this i know is true, but i
can't ignore my heart crying out to you, as
tears fall down my cheeks, I see the
hopelessness of this world affecting me,
even if these situations were not present, I
still feel you heart is not in it, wanting
so much to approach you and to set my soul
free, but rejection runs through my mind and
a change for the worst haunts me, when I
think of fairytales, I know you are my
prince charming and I am your snow white,
I'm just waiting for you to kiss me, I am
your cinderella i'm just waiting for my
glass slipper, I am your everything I'm just
waiting for you to hold me..

      
    

** I wrote this over 2 years ago**

  






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aziza
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since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995
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1 posted 2007-05-31 11:27 PM


This is much fun to read out loud.  Very good.  I like it lots.

Welcome.

Alison

Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
2 posted 2007-05-31 11:28 PM


This beautiful poem is as romantic as your name.  a very touching cry.
I always love to read love poems.

write more
welcome to this wonderful site of PIP.

tatalinia
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since 2005-12-17
Posts 137
CA, US
3 posted 2007-06-01 07:54 AM


I definently can relate to your poem, it was beautiful. Thanks for sharing it.

I do not need shine or wealth, just a pen and some paper for my health

Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2007-06-01 04:46 PM



Welcome to the friendliest poetic circle on the Internet~

Enjoy your stay and share more with us~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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