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aziza
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

0 posted 2007-05-31 08:22 PM


Solstice Reality


Earth’s green
Sun’s yellow
Summer’s song
And you and me

Love’s poem
Laughter’s tune
Red wine
And picnic lunch

Summer Solstice
Beer gardens
Hot dog stands
And mosquitoes

Damn mosquitoes
Fun spoilers
anyway

...

Alison

© Copyright 2007 Alison - All Rights Reserved
Snowflake From Hell
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1 posted 2007-05-31 08:37 PM


wow for no verbs in there that was pretty good

I am the little cracked mirror

Sunshine
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2 posted 2007-05-31 08:51 PM


WooHoo!  It's been a while since our Nan gave us such a challenge!

She must be ready to go back to school!!


Drauntz
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3 posted 2007-05-31 09:22 PM


very good! very good!

beautiful!!

enjoyed.

aziza
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
4 posted 2007-05-31 10:06 PM


Snowflake From Hell, drauntz and Sunshine
(tried to keep Snowflake seperate from Sunshine -- ya'll know she would do her melting thing!)

Thank you for reading this poem.  It was a fun challenge.

A

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5 posted 2007-05-31 11:02 PM




well done Alison!

aziza
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
6 posted 2007-05-31 11:10 PM


Thank you, Kate dahlink.
Thank you.

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