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Krawdad
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0 posted 2007-05-31 12:46 PM



          It Will Not Keep


          Much like a row of fresh vegetables
          in your garden . . .

              - plant the seed well in good soil and full sun
              - water it
              - feed it
              - attend to its needs
              - take care for its weeds

              - relish it when young and tender

              - cultivate it
              - let some of it mature
              - savor it

              - and share the fruit before the colors fade



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serenity blaze
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1 posted 2007-05-31 01:15 AM


and oh your wisdom prevails...

love this-love this-love this

and yes, y'gotta enjoy the feast when the time is ripe

good to see you!

Drauntz
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2 posted 2007-05-31 01:58 AM


love this poem but still think what they are.

enjoyed.

aziza
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3 posted 2007-05-31 02:50 AM


Yep, nurture it, enjoy the growth, and share the bounty of what is grown.  Sums up many things, doesn't it.

I like this and agree .. there's a lot of wisdom in a refreshing message.

A

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4 posted 2007-05-31 08:30 AM


excellent

but I'd expect no less

1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
5 posted 2007-05-31 08:38 AM


of seeds and people

Midnitesun
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Gaia
6 posted 2007-05-31 11:37 AM


True wisdom is knowing how to accept and enjoy the whole. For the entire life-process, from seed planting, through all levels of growth and nurturing to reach the harvesting stages, demands our complete participation. We must see, hear, feel and breathe each moment fully.
What a treat, to read you again!

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2007-06-03 12:43 PM


Enjoyed...James
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