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Promiscuous Planet
By: Noah Eaton
5/18/06

Betty Bajawaller’s,
got a case of the vapors,
on a hot dog budget,
with a coffee brick to taper,
went all kookabarn,
on a vaycay in Huahine, Tahiti,
laybacking peace treaties,
with the aquamarine graffiti.
She knew if everything’s under control,
she’s going way too slow,
she gave a charity throw of electric glow,
living with her toes on the nose.

Little Sally Saucer,
is there sitting in the water,
playing sharks and minnows,
with the river otters,
hailed a round trip,
around the edge of the folding lip,
a swivel-pinned mutton head,
on a prune whipped pirate ship.
She chased the bergwind,
swiftly down the frothy fall line,
re-alligning the high life…

Sapphire throne, impart your grateful heart,
a burning cathedral culinary art,
perfection of thought sheltered by carnauba palms,
flinching nourished with invincible balm…

Killer Dana’s,
in her zucchini bikini,
tanning on the hood,
of her yellow Lamborghini,
concierge of supernatural affairs,
licking a slab of miele biscotti,
migrates the years away,
between California and Kiribati.
She straddles the equator,
with a liquid cool aesthetic,
athletically unapologetic.

Sapphire throne, impart your grateful heart,
a burning cathedral culinary art,
perfection of thought sheltered by carnauba palms,
flinching nourished with invincible balm…

Alien love child,
hold your hands out as over a flame,
open to the sunshine,
the windows of all your veins,
fire in the sky,
may your phoenix lullaby flow,
from my toes to the plateau…

Promiscuous planet,
smolder the wide world over,
from the funny bone,
and beyond the picnic shoulder,
atchi katchi liberatchi,
take a peach, take a plum,
hey, go on, grab a piece
of cherry bubble gum.
Let’s make the starship blitz,
to the Rigil Kentaurus Ritz,
and Taos Hum like the Pleidans...

...surfing the universe like dreamy speed demons...

Sapphire throne, impart your grateful heart,
a burning cathedral culinary art,
perfection of thought sheltered by carnauba palms,
flinching nourished with invincible balm…
Sapphire throne, impart your grateful heart,
a burning cathedral culinary art,
perfection of thought sheltered by carnauba palms,
flinching nourished with invincible balm…


"If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other"

Mother Teresa

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1 posted 2007-05-30 08:21 PM


A very playful read, it made me smile.
Something I needed, Thank You

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2 posted 2007-06-02 10:13 AM


Good morning, my fellow space cadet! It appears that we are from the same planet!

"take a peach, take a plum,
hey, go on, grab a piece
of cherry bubble gum."

Those are my kind of tasty treats!

"atchi katchi liberatchi"

I enjoyed this dreamy surf of the Universe!

Nanoo, Nanoo!

Linda Lou

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