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HopeS
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0 posted 2007-05-30 06:59 AM



When I Wish Upon A Star

Are those stars listening
I whispered to many
Wishes in which I send
Have they heard any

Twinkling clusters gather
Assemble and shine
I counted upon the stars
With wishes of mine

While sparkling up above
All brightly glistening
When I wish upon a star
Can they be listening

Will messages reach afar
Upon the stars above
Nightly I send my wishes
In conveying my love


Hope ©2007
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passing shadows
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1 posted 2007-05-30 12:53 PM


I've often felt the same way Hope


Drauntz
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2 posted 2007-05-30 07:31 PM


beautiful.

enjoyed.

JL
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3 posted 2007-05-31 04:52 PM


Never give up...

JL

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~Thomas Jefferson


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4 posted 2007-05-31 05:09 PM


Bee-ooo-t-ful!

          
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Pilgrimage
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5 posted 2007-05-31 05:55 PM


Oh, I like the circular nature of this one.  Excellent form and language usage.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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