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Jenna Member
since 2007-03-20
Posts 180 |
Pressures too much You have to loosen up your hold. You burden me with your demands Your criteria I am bound to fail Your dreams I am sure to shatter. All this I live with all this hurt that I cause weighs down on me and is with me every second of everyday dominating my thoughts and speech my actions and my demeanor. Pull any tighter and I am bound to go underwater and I wonder if I will ever be found again. |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
poor thing. Where is the strong emotion before? this is a very good poem that so clearly states the unwanted pressure of "love". So freedom is more important than "love". enjoyed as always. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
powerful, emotive, very 'real' write! sustained applause!! |
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