The Sincerity of Her Words

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Open Poetry #40

The Sincerity of Her Words

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2007-05-29 06:43 AM

The Sincerity of Her Words

Once on an island
a man and a woman
planted seeds of love
inside their hearts.
They were different
but they accepted
their differences.
They had problems
but they knew the
power of forgiveness.
Along the way
doubts and fears
tried to convince
them that love
wasn't real,
but then as time
went by and she
still offered her
love to me, and I
to her, we began
to believe in love
and to trust in
each other.
The desires within
our hearts keep bringing
us closer together
and today I realize that
it was the sincerity
of her words that
inspired me to trust
and to believe in love.

JamesLee
29May
2007

Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2007-05-29 07:31 AM

Very beautiful feelings from your heart James.

passing shadows
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displaced

2 posted 2007-05-29 09:42 AM

nicely done

aziza
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3 posted 2007-05-29 10:03 AM

I really enjoy your poetry, James -- and I love the turn that it has taken since I started reading.

Alison

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

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a 'Universalist' !

4 posted 2007-05-29 12:27 PM

fine (quite 'real' & romantic!) 'write'!

Applause!!

Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16

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Los Angeles California

5 posted 2007-05-29 12:38 PM

Your poem is kind of life that everybody want to live in it... beautiful and romantic.

enjoyed happily as always.

Honeybunch
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since 2001-12-29

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South Africa

6 posted 2007-05-29 01:41 PM

Lovely, James. Yes, to be inspired is the greatest but without the will to be so inspired it is as nothing. Always takes two.

Forever in Love
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since 2007-05-31

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7 posted 2007-05-31 11:52 PM

This is soo true and such a great poem!

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

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USA

8 posted 2007-06-01 05:52 PM

liked it

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