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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

0 posted 2007-05-29 06:09 AM

Amber reflections
of sunsets glow
steadily sinking
    lower
over the horizon

     where your dreams lie

I see mirrored images
   through your eyes
of hope floating
upon waves of courage
that come    crashing down

   resulting the same
   strength is gained

         and the dreams
            of soul       remain

holding closely,
sights unseen
  mystical moments
     spent in twilights gleam

whispers of love
on gentle breeze
the unknown touch
     a silent tease

simplistic innocence

grasping keys
of mysteries

'tis a magical life
when the world is seen

through your eyes...

{revised 5-27-07}

give me your heart make it real or else forget about it. (santana)

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2007-05-29 09:41 AM

indeed!

aziza
Member Elite

since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

2 posted 2007-05-29 10:10 AM

Gentle Spirit,

A perfect poem to start my day. You bring a smile to my face with the beauty of your words. Well written and, oh so, magical.

Alison

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

3 posted 2007-05-29 10:16 AM

"whispers of love
on gentle breeze
the unknown touch
a silent tease

simplistic innocence

grasping keys
of mysteries

'tis a magical life
when the world is seen

through your eyes..."

What beautiful poetry you have penned here.
It’s just too beautiful for comment.

JL

Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed:
blessed are they that have not seen, and yet have believed.
~Jesus Christ

MoonShadow
Senior Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 943
Dark side of the Moon.

4 posted 2007-05-29 11:56 AM

    G.S. Lovely write.

'tis a magical life
when the world is seen

through your eyes...

     As is ourselves when we can see ourselves through the eyes of one who loves... a good feeling... up lifting.

     Thank you for sharing what You see.
                Peace,
              MoonShadow
.

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

5 posted 2007-05-29 01:53 PM

Simply lovely, GS! To be able to look at the world through another's eyes is a gift which leads not only to beauty but to understanding.

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

6 posted 2007-05-29 03:03 PM

beautiful donna
lovely words
for daydream believers

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

7 posted 2007-05-30 07:06 AM

ah my friends, thank you each so very much. Your words make me smile.

gmcooper
Junior Member

since 2007-05-30

Posts 47

8 posted 2007-05-30 10:33 PM

Gentle Spirit,

This is very lovely!

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

9 posted 2007-05-31 06:12 AM

gmcooper, thank you and welcome to Pip. I hope you enjoy your time here.

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

10 posted 2007-06-01 09:41 PM

"the unknown touch
a silent tease"

that gets a big sigh from me
gentle Donna

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