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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2007-05-28 02:05 PM


Your words follow me,
through the rustle of
gentle winds,

In the quiet of day,
when birds chirp
in the bright sun.

When butterflies
glide upon flowers
in my garden,

Your words shadow
my soul, my spirit,
walking beside me,

Throughout the
forest of pine
trees and ferns.

When evening falls,
tranquility abounds,
your voice I hear,

The world becomes silent
as the moon beams bright,
but your words whisper
in my ear.

Stars burst forth,
into the majestic
night sky,

Your eyes are
winking at me,
I can touch you,

My heart can rest,
sound asleep,
with your words,

Echoing love,
within the shadows,
of the beats of my
heart.


© Copyright 2007 Millette A. (Lester) Addison - All Rights Reserved
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
1 posted 2007-05-28 07:29 PM


beautifully written~~

M

secondhanddreampoet
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a 'Universalist' !
2 posted 2007-05-28 10:53 PM


very pleasant!

[enjoyed this 'write'!]

Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
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Los Angeles California
3 posted 2007-05-28 11:24 PM


words in shadow of love shine brightly.

very beautiful poem. enjoyed happily.

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california
4 posted 2007-05-31 02:15 PM


absolutely beautiful

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

aziza
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5 posted 2007-06-02 03:15 AM


ARH

This is magic
Lovely
Reads like water

A

paullallady
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6 posted 2007-06-02 02:05 PM


What an absolutely beautiful descriptive write.
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