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Cloud Painter |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
I can paint cloud pictures in white blue skies Brushing strokes of dreams from memories gone Washing green pastures with tears from my eyes Adding small snapshots of time fleeting by Each one signed by those who have since moved on I can paint cloud pictures in white blue skies The wind whispers songs to cover lost cries Emotions bursting into trembling song Washing green pastures with tears from my eyes Death captures time as it takes off to fly Yesterday holds friends forever as one I can paint cloud pictures in white blue skies Life soars from sorrows like a butterfly Lush lands flourish under nourishing sun Washing green pastures with tears from my eyes Time heals all wounds until the blood runs dry Muted by cries of hearts once thought undone I can paint cloud pictures in white blue skies Look high to the blue and hear the soft sigh Sheer portraits are framed as if to be hung I can paint cloud pictures in white blue skies Washing green pastures with tears from my eyes ... Alison [This message has been edited by aziza (05-28-2007 10:58 PM).] |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"Washing green pastures with tears from my eyes" lovely work Alison |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Thank you, lovely Lady, for reading and taking the time to offer encouragement. Alison |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes, those last two lines really make an impact! Love this one! |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Dixie Thank you for taking the time to read and write your thoughts. You among those whose work I look for -- thank you for not leaving. There'd be too big a hole on the boards. Alison |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
"Look high to the blue and hear the soft sigh Sheer portraits are framed as if to be hung I can paint cloud pictures in white blue skies Washing green pastures with tears from my eyes" Beautiful! |
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divine chaos Senior Member
since 2006-07-09
Posts 617dancing 'neath the moon |
Ali, this came out beautifully!!  I knew you could make it sing *hugs* ~Sheli |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Thank you, Honeybunch, for stopping by and reading. It means a lot to me. ------------ Sheli Dahlink, Thank you for setting me straight and for the help. You know that I love you lots and value your thoughts as much as your beauty. (grins) xoxoxoox Ali |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Very nicely painted! Now stop gnashing your teeth and paint some more.  |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
MidniteSun, (laughs) I almost typed "Midnite Sun Run" --thank you for reading and taking the time to write a note. It's a joy to know that you have been here. Alison |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ok...so I have this fence ya see...needs some sanding and lots of paint,,,,if ya help I will make the oatmeal? (n-joyed it ms) |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Alison, I have so enjoyed watching you grow in your diversity as a writer. I honestly belive that this is your best ever and my new favourite from you. Hugs lady A~ |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
a most pleasant, enjoyable ‘write’! I particularly love: “I can paint cloud pictures in white blue skies Brushing strokes of dreams from memories gone” and: “Emotions bursting into trembling song…” serious applause!! |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
DS Thank you -- and I'll paint that fence any day. But in the name of friendship. Please, hold the oatmeal. Thanks for reading and writing. A |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Beautiul Gentle Spirit, I have learned much in this almost year that I have been here. And, yes, I am stretching and trying styles that once I never knew of -- that is what PiP has given me. All of you have nutured that desire and fed it -- and now, it is almost in a feeding frenzy. Doesn't that sound lovely? See what happens when I respond before breakfast? Thank you - this is also one of my favorites. Alison |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
secondhanddreampoet Thank you. I am really enjoying your poetry and am very thrilled when you enjoy some of mine. Thank you for reading and responding. Alison |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Alison, breakfast has never been more delicious than what you have been serving up with your feeding frenzy!!  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 thanks Alison |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Thank you, Dixie girl. Loved that you stopped in. ---- Gentle Spirit You made me smile. Thank you. Alison |
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