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When You Are There
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When You Are There |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
When You Are There Your eyes, alluringly as the sea Burgundy charm is your personality Your smile a temperate shoreline awash by a cool river and coral vine It is there I do dream of you... I dream of mountains capped with snow Your silhouette burnished against the morning glow Lush valleys of tall grass swaying with a breath of wind Birch tree leaves fluttering, calling to nest the winter wren It is there I must dream of you... Away from this ocean and its solitude; miles of disquiet Years awaiting providence to twinkle, just one small beam “A moment in time” is all I ask when you are in my dreams You and the mountains, the grassy green fields, and desire I dream of you in my arms I dream of evenings of twilight’s charm All dreams of you, lush valleys, and cool mountain air In dreams it all seems so real when you are there... . |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
“A moment in time” is all I ask when you are in my dreams You and the mountains, the grassy green fields, and desire Jamie, this was absolute summer in its finest array...it seems you and I are alike, we cherish and live for only moments, and yet, moments can give enough happiness for a lifetime. I pray you can be with her Jamie... God Bless Luv and Hugs Me Happy Weekend  [This message has been edited by LeeJ (05-25-2007 08:08 AM).] |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
What a wonderful feeling, to let this pretty rendering fall softly about my mind. Wonderful. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
soft and dreamy writing. Lovely! |
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trey_c Junior Member
since 2007-05-24
Posts 12 |
Whoever said diamonds are a girls best friend lied... dreams are... by far!!! I wish mine were as descriptive as this  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JL~ *sighs* emitted at this beauty~ She is one very fortunate soulmate~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Beguiling...enthralling...totally captivating! You are one romantic Texan! As you love, may you also be loved!  Linda |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
JL...Bravo...Great romantic poetry... Totally impressed by your words...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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