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TerryW
Senior Member

since 2000-03-23

Posts 779
Louisville, Mississippi, USA

0 posted 2007-05-24 04:58 PM

Lost

Among the shadows, dark and grave,
A wilderness of frozen stone;
In remnants of a life I once did crave
I find myself cold, tired, and alone.

Where is the Light? The Joy? The Hope?
The Love that once was shared?
How did I end up on this slippery slope,
Above a chasm of empty despair?

Have I been Forsaken? Left behind
In this wasteland of shattered dreams?
No warmth, no light to comfort my mind
I waste away in Time’s merciless streams.

A prisoner of the Darkness,
Into this never-ending night I am bound;
Until I can find my own forgiveness,
And light the path that I may also be found.

~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

1 posted 2007-05-24 05:58 PM

well written. true poem of lost.. sadly lost.

enjoyed the beautiful poem.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2007-05-25 08:47 AM

Terry~
Very 'different ink' for you ... but you splashed it brilliantly !

Love ya' my friend~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

trey_c
Junior Member

since 2007-05-24

Posts 12

3 posted 2007-05-25 08:57 AM

i liked this...
good way to describe that feeling we all feel at some time or other...

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

4 posted 2007-05-26 08:15 AM

Terry...what a joy to click on your poem and finally see the handsome face to connect to words I've cherished over the years

I feel the deep sense of loss in these words here. Love is so hard to find and even harder to lose...but loss of love is not loss of self, it took me a long time to figure that one out. So...lost? ...maybe just misdirected at this time and they don't make maps to cover that. Glad to see you writing but hope to see you writing in a happier light soon

(hugs)
Ruth

I am nothing special...and my name will soon be forgotten,but I've loved another with all my heart and soul,and to me,this has always been enough.~N.S

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

5 posted 2007-05-27 11:33 AM

Terry, oh how these lines ache ~

"How did I end up on this slippery slope,
Above a chasm of empty despair?"

~ an exceptionally sad, yet highly poetic, piece of writing.

Giving you an extra hug-o-love,

Linda

Paul Wilson

Member Elite

since 2002-07-07

Posts 4711
United States

6 posted 2007-05-27 01:42 PM

Terry...Full of feeling from your heart the way pure poetry should be. Great write...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

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