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Robert Frazier
Senior Member

since 2003-02-06

Posts 1014

0 posted 2007-05-23 01:48 PM

I have no songs to sing
No verse or melody
I lay awake tonight

I have no dreams to dream
Not even fantasy
I lay awake tonight

Stars hang heavenly
Falling like rain
On me

Now pouring down
Sky flowing into
The sea

There’s only black-blinding light in my eyes
An eternal thin line that divides earth from sky

Where do I go from here?

Looking for love in the smallest of places
Paralyzed till the black becomes faces

I began to sing

Something about a dream
Of wide open spaces
And fairy silk laces
You’ll cover me

When I close my eyes
Tonight

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2007-05-23 05:34 PM

I like the way this rounds back
to song...

Thank you, Robert.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2007-05-23 07:28 PM

I can relate to this

beautiful ending

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

3 posted 2007-05-24 02:23 AM

a very beautiful poem

enjoyed

JaySea
Junior Member

since 2006-11-17

Posts 23
Salina, KS - USA

4 posted 2007-05-24 07:45 AM

Very true to life... I think everyone has "been there - done that" with this experience. Enjoyed it greatly!

JaySea

You are your own greatest resource.... use all that can be revealed through YOU. JaySea

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

5 posted 2007-05-24 08:16 AM

Looking for love in the smallest of places

yes, we have all been there....

it takes each of us so long to realize, doesn't it...each in our own time

yes, loved the way this went back to brightness and smiles...

well done!

trey_c
Junior Member

since 2007-05-24

Posts 12

6 posted 2007-05-24 08:24 AM

I agree!!

This was very nice... well done

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2007-05-24 08:51 AM

Very much enjoyed the read RF.
Good to read you once again.

Hugs~Nancy

~ Trace my body with your words,
in doing so, you touch my heart ~

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