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Ode to a Toad
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Ode to a Toad |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Repost: Ode to a Toad Lily pads pack homes lagoon Below a chrome and sexy moon Where nomad toads all Galahads Croak their love and wait unclad Flamboyant they gloat their glower Offering dower on the hour Knights of the night they sing and recite Croaking with might their songs of delight Ruckus tunes of male ensnare Tawdry songs beyond compare Horny for a closures mate Below a rapist moon of fate Bold and constant is their sweep Passionate sounds of re-beep Roaring a rile of rhapsody Stating fruitions destiny Exploding echoes of flimflam Frantically calling here I am |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
hehe, I'm smiling Sir Sy...remembering something I heard... Ya gotta kiss a lotta toads before you find the prince...hehe Outstanding write/right, love your poetry  Morning |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ And I  To. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Reh-DIP! *G* You bring to mind those nights at the farm right after a rain... the chorus of "here I am" is impressive... seems every one of them are swearing they're really a prince! LOL I like this so much... excellent work! |
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JaySea Junior Member
since 2006-11-17
Posts 23Salina, KS - USA |
Night sounds are a special language all alone unto it's self. Enjoyed the writing. JaySea (Joseph) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
suthern Glad you enjoyed sweetie.  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JaySea Yes they are, thank you. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
reposts from you are always a pleasure to read...Hello Mr. T.... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Magnus, Thank you my friend. |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
a very emotional poem, sir. and a very good poem. enjoyed. have a wonderful morning, sir Tabin here LA is 11.30 Pm. |
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ivordavies Senior Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 739Chester, England |
Sey, You can see this every Saturday night outside the clubs in Chester! But you put poetry into the fracas.... Ivor |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
a 'write' of great fun! [much enjoyed!] fine applause!! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Drauntz, Thank you for the lovely comment. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ivor, Thank you my friend. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
secondhanddreampoet Thank you for the applause my friend. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Almost makes you wanna croak!  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Larry C, Right on man. LOL |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"Exploding echoes of flimflam Frantically calling here I am" Galahad toads all say the same thing Sir Sy it's the quiet ones you gotta look out for incredible poem |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lady Once again thank you sweetie. |
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