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Titia Geertman
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0 posted 2007-05-23 05:09 AM




When wind has blown
all thoughts
from mind
and the morning sun
is rising
I simply enjoy
the fragrance of rose
in the silence
of my being

A moment of perfection

Until slowly

              but inevitable

my brain starts
a new day of planning


Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

© Copyright 2007 Titia Geertman - All Rights Reserved
LeeJ
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1 posted 2007-05-23 07:51 AM


Yes, Tina, indeed a perfect moment, with the day's plan yet to bloom
incredible and beautiful...

Hugs and thank you

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2 posted 2007-05-23 10:01 AM


Ahhhh.... *S* If only every day could begin with such moments! *S* Beautiful!!!
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3 posted 2007-05-23 12:31 PM


Your lovely words and poetry started my day here in Canada with a smile Titia, have a good one yourself.

          
Carpe' Diem    

Titia Geertman
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4 posted 2007-05-23 06:37 PM


Thanks to all and I'm in the lucky position to start each morning that way, because I don't have to go to work, my roses start to bloom so beautifully and it will go on and on till winter's cold will put them to sleep.

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

passing shadows
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5 posted 2007-05-23 07:17 PM


beautiful

thanks for sharing

SmartChick
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6 posted 2007-05-24 01:58 AM


Oh, how beautiful!
Drauntz
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7 posted 2007-05-24 02:07 AM


what a bright moon for me tonight. beautiful picture and beautiful poem.

enjoyed

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8 posted 2007-05-24 09:40 AM


DearestTitia~
You are beautiful ... this is beautiful~
It is always a brighter day when I see you on the PiP pages~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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JamesMichael
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9 posted 2007-05-24 07:47 PM


Wonderful...James
paullallady
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10 posted 2007-05-24 08:17 PM


I absolutely love roses and I definately relate to this poem.  beautiful!
tracie66
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11 posted 2007-05-24 11:30 PM


Ahhh know this well, penned beautifully.
~hugs~
Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing



OwlSA
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12 posted 2007-05-26 07:56 AM


Ah, in this today, I smelt the roses of my mother's garden a long, long time ago.  Thank you (more than you know).

- Owl

Sunshine
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13 posted 2007-05-26 01:58 PM


Titia,

you "scent" this poem out
just in time...

indeed, a perfect moment!


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