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Open Poetry #40

Hey Pretty Girl

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2007-05-22 05:52 PM

Hey Pretty Girl

This one knew how to turn me on,
this woman with the red outfit on.
She made her living as a Parisian dancer.
Rumors said she was a skillful romancer,
a heartbreak enhancer, and when I was in her
presence my teenage heartbeat would run amuck.

She and her sister would play with my
shifter while driving to Le Moulin Rouge
in my rusty old pickup truck.
And when it came time for bed, I remember
the words that were always said,
"Hey pretty girl, are you ready to ride
my pickup truck?" And she would always reply,
"Tonite, you will have no such luck, but ask
again in a few years when you're all grown up."

JamesLee
22May
2007
Rusty Old
Pick-up
Truck
Series

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

1 posted 2007-05-22 07:11 PM

you sure need to trade-in your old truck.

a beautiful poem of romance as always.

enjoyed

Kristabell
Senior Member

since 2003-11-29

Posts 678
Portland, OR

2 posted 2007-05-22 07:26 PM

This has a hint of irony.

Much enjoyed,
Kristabell

"You are today where your thoughts have brought you; you will be tomorrow where your thoughts take you." James Lane Allen

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2007-05-23 06:55 PM

Thank you Drauntz and Krisabell for the nice responses...James

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