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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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was it the wind then that did the unraveling and burned your new tattoo that made your voice moan hollow hungry sounds that only a woman knows though she denies the language was it the wind then that touched the ends of you and made the hot side of day melt to panting chills that shivered your spine sides and caused you to look for eyes on the faces of trees in the forests of your mind was it the wind then that took your secrecy and bathed you in brazen was it the wind that made you woman _________________ daark |
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gmcooper Junior Member
since 2007-05-30
Posts 47 |
the wind and the tattoo image is a very unique opening. Your poetry is interesting and wakes me up to read. Thanks. |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
D~ I love the images this creates in the forest of my mind. Good to feel your words. K |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
beautiful D  |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
What beautiful music to wake up to. Maybe we'll all feel you in the breeze of the day. Lovely poetry. A |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
the wind whispers blows to and fro in and around above and between I feel the magic and hear the melody the secret is revealed within the woman of me. Sorry for the quick poetry babe, you inspired me tho' |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Marvelous poetry! Enjoyed! "though she denies the language" - Perhaps only truly a woman when she doesn't deny. |
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ladylisa Member
since 2007-04-29
Posts 342Florida USA |
Your work just leaves me in awe. Love reading it. |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
This poem leaves me thinking.... Neeraja |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DarkOne~ Yes~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
pipster kewlcrew...thank you each for the touch my words are humble without your eyes |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Stranger darlin' was the wind and the tattoo love this |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
oh my Mr Daark... very nice words here RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
oh my Mr Daark... very nice words here RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ladyone and ms b, thanks to you |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Yeah, pretty much. The wind and rain. Read them all D. Someday you should gather them for books that smell like leather but feel like secret companions. Love, reg |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
someday perhaps regal one....but then would you bind them with the strings of your windows for me? Thank you dragon slayer.. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
one could only hope... well done, Sir. |
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