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howardtsu
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0 posted 2007-05-22 12:38 PM



           it was just the pain talking

i had nothing to gain from balking

i'd go insane if i thought i was walking away

        from the chance of a lifetime

you said on the plane ride home that our Thomas Crown Affair was the lifeline

                    you needed



                                                                  love,

                                                                  eve



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Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
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1 posted 2007-05-22 02:43 PM


now, eve made a sound. not as quite sounded as the title said.

enjoyed the story. and the poem too.

CHARLAX
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since 2007-05-21
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2 posted 2007-05-22 03:37 PM


this reference to the NOVELLA STORY MOVIE
the THOMAS CROWN AFFAIR
YES
this poet has his own stYle
has really found his niche

CHARLAX ici

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2007-05-22 05:28 PM


Nice...James
Kristabell
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4 posted 2007-05-22 07:40 PM


Been there, done that. Love this poem.

Kristabell

"You are today where your thoughts have brought you; you will be tomorrow where your thoughts take you." James Lane Allen

howardtsu
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5 posted 2007-05-26 01:37 PM


thanks guys      

hey charlax      

"niche" that's a very interesting word

i believed it at first

now ..... i don't know, i keep thinking relationships are about two people spending time together

but maybe i met her for inspiration

or perspiration

either way i've definitely been in desperation

without her



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