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Kristabell
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0 posted 2007-05-21 11:59 PM



A melding of truth, beauty, understanding;
Sadness, relief, and unending resilience.
A feather caught in a wind storm
A mist hovering, obscuring time’s landing,
A bridge over troubled waters
A fine breeze stirring colorful leaves.
Confusing clarity creates courage,
A tentative grasping at the illusive,
The non of sense, tense,
The Frustration and the commiseration,
A bearing down to commence.
For fair faith and untainted beauty
A falling star, wishes,
The Fountain of Youth,
A clear lake full of fishes.
Around the wind blows,
Capturing all within its hold
A presents is known, silver tone,
Growing beyond, beneath, between, and into
The heated embrace of a chill, chill, night.

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Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
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1 posted 2007-05-22 02:13 PM


confused but there is a "Silver Tone" to embrace the chill night. What a happy ending.

this is a very beautiful poem. indeed a very good one.

JamesMichael
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2 posted 2007-05-22 05:58 PM


Enjoyed...James
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3 posted 2007-05-22 07:24 PM


Krista~

'The non of sense, tense,'

Oh my ... I know this !!



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~*Marge*~

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4 posted 2007-05-22 10:15 PM


wonderful writing!
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