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Margherita
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Eternity

0 posted 2007-05-20 10:00 AM



    


No matter where


Curled together in a corolla

inebriated by its fragrance

exposed to the sky’s gaze

in sunlight’s embrace,

or packed in the underground

hands clutched tightly

around the steel bar,

with sensitive fingertips

flashing forth lightning

across our inner skies

in heavy storm alert.

No matter where we meet

our eyes are burning furnaces

to be crossed in abnegation,

following the subtle call

of enticing whispers of the soul.

Tangled in each other’s charms

in a room filled with voices

of unaware distracted people

we swim in the crystal waters

of mutual recognition,

gliding soundlessly

upon multidimensional trails

towards the core of being.

Meeting upon dream clouds

while facing our daily tasks,

expanding in sweetness

while trapped in the traffic,

reaching for a touch of love

in moments of silent yearning.

No matter where we meet,

whether on petals of light

or in the dimness of a rainy night,

Love is our guiding path.

Love!

[This message has been edited by Margherita (05-20-2007 10:49 AM).]

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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2007-05-20 10:55 AM


Margherita
An elegant write, enjoyed.

Martie
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2 posted 2007-05-20 11:41 AM


Margherita....You travel light and with light...if love is in the air... everywhere.  
Earth Angel
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3 posted 2007-05-20 05:42 PM


Margherita, I felt the flush of love with every word, nuance, and image that flowed from your loving heart pen.

I 'love' your writing! ~ and spirit!

Linda

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4 posted 2007-05-20 07:30 PM


I love how this poem flowed and I love the imagry.  It is truly beautiful.

Alison

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5 posted 2007-05-20 07:34 PM


so perfectly done, dear Margherita. You always bring beauties to here. love the picture and the poem of love. yes, shall love be the only guiding of life!!!

beautiful...to soul

thank you

Kristabell
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6 posted 2007-05-20 08:33 PM


You took me down a dreamy path. Love this write. A nice melding of words and situations.

Much enjoyed,
Kristabell

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The Lady
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7 posted 2007-05-20 09:28 PM



"whether on petals of light

or in the dimness of a rainy night,

Love is our guiding path."

this one took me by storm Margherita
amazing!

JamesMichael
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8 posted 2007-05-20 10:14 PM


Love...James
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9 posted 2007-05-21 07:43 AM


Margherita~
Dear lady, you capture our hearts with such beautiful writes~

LOVELY~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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10 posted 2007-05-21 09:03 AM


Meeting upon dream clouds

while facing our daily tasks,

expanding in sweetness

while trapped in the traffic,

reaching for a touch of love

in moments of silent yearning.

~*~

Sweet daydreams!

Margherita
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11 posted 2007-05-21 05:58 PM


Thank you my dear Poet friends for the kind and generous replies!
Love,
Margherita

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12 posted 2007-07-03 02:46 PM


so glad I stopped by and caught this. I have missed you and your words~ This is awesome

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

paullallady
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13 posted 2007-07-04 07:47 PM


beautiful imagery and picture.  wonderful poem.
Patricia
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14 posted 2007-07-04 09:06 PM


Warmly lovely.  A superb piece of writing.

Patricia

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15 posted 2007-07-06 03:15 AM




(smiles) And by the looks of it, you must have absolutely met that special someone on proverbial pedals of light, inebriated in their very fragrance, yay! (does happy pollen polka) This is absolutely beautiful, sweet friend, no matter when and where you write your poems never fail to enchant us all, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Margherita, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other"

Mother Teresa

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