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Travel Intrigue |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Repost: Travel Intrigue The intrigue of pictorials Cinderella attire Offered in subliminal form Sets desire on fire Transference lulls a glitzy sleep Moonlight figures dace ballet Tittering winks and champagne drinks Lures you into interplay Veiled within surreptitiousness Flirtatious syrupy water Tasty gulps of outrageous pulp Makes for a heady mortar Vivacious waiting elegance Promised tête-à-tête so sweet Page on page of dream on dream Harvesting your thoughts’ complete There is no question but a scheme To guest or not to guest the theme |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Wow, dear Seymour, this is indeed intriguing! You rendered the idea with your usual mastery. ... "harvesting your thoughts complete" ... that is truly amazing! Thoroughly enjoyed! Love and have a great Sunday! Margherita  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Margherita Thank you dear.  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Margherita |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"Page on page of dream on dream" I know what you mean Sir Sy I got pages and pages and more pages can I have one of those kisses please? |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
what a travel...on the blue screen. I can just log off anytime if there is chaos...right sir? so very good a poem of PIP. and a smart one. Have a wonderful Sunday evening! Sir Tabin |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Drauntz A delightful reply, thank you. |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
A masterpiece of words, as always. This reels a girl in. Nice write, Kristabell "You are today where your thoughts have brought you; you will be tomorrow where your thoughts take you." James Lane Allen |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Kristabell Glad you enjoyed the read, thank you. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thanks for the visit to Disneyland... it brought back some very young memories!   |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, Mr. T. the Tease!  I'm intrigued! ~ "to guest or not to guest" ~ that is the question! I'd like to BE a guest in your Cinderella Land. Here's to "Tittering winks and champagne drinks" EA |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ I can relate to the tête-à-tête that your poetry takes me to~  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine You welcome my dear. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel So Angels wink and drink, How interesting. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, A tête-à-tête, I can't wait. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I'll be traveling later this week... this is just what I needed to read right now! *S* Beautiful work! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
suthern Glad it hit the spot. |
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