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tatalinia Member
since 2005-12-17
Posts 137CA, US 
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May 18th 2007 Drunken State My life is devoted to you on a spinning wheel My heart hanging from the strings of my fan And I feel the wind of your breathe on my face Your light shining down on me I carrie on Im faded in time by the liquor in my system Forgive me but its how I let you go I love you but you know that I was such a fool to let you know Yes I write this while in another world But would it be this good if in my right mind? Why did you leave when needed the most Should I forgive you for all this pain? Each day I awake still thinking of you And by now Im usually done with most But you have cast a spell on me unconditionally Shameful and now you just carrie on As if nothing goes on you think of me not Saddened Iam by this path I choose to not focus And burden my life with other strifes Of letting go of the yesterdays But not afraid to think of the good times When you were truely mine I even carry the razor from your house And as the sun goes down you think of someone else Forgive me for this pain I carry But of this is the worse heart break I have lived I let go of it all I have know choice God let me fall And once again Im lost With wondering who is next in the foolishness Forgive me if I love never again Im done , truely Im done Forever forgive me , I pray forgive me some I do not need shine or wealth, just a pen and some paper for my health |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
Drunken State I am reading it when you have forgot what you wrote. very funny. I read into sadness and heartache. poem, poem, what a torture on the soul!!! enjoyed your "drunken State'. people speak truth when drunk. |
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