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Robert Jordan
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since 2007-02-07
Posts 392
Philadelphia Pa USA

0 posted 2007-05-18 03:21 PM


Sally and Felix,
they’re sitting on
Richey Goldsmith’s stoop
across from the settlement house
on New Market Street,
between Brown and Popular.  

Richey,
he’s up at the Jumbo Theater,
watching a movie
with Butch and Wawa.

Sally and Felix,
they’re just sitting there,
kind of minding their
own business.

Felix has his head
resting in Sally’s lap.  

He’s having a bad day,
his tongue lolling
out of his mouth.

A tomato car rolls up,
and two policemen get out.  

They decide Felix
looks a little suspicious,
laying there on Sally’s lap
with his tongue hanging out.  

They decide they had better
pad him down.  

Felix starts to scream,
he doesn’t know
what’s going on at all.  

As I say, he’s having
one of his bad days.

Mrs. Goldsmith
pops out of her door—
hollers at the police.

“Hey—
what you mugs doing
anyway?  
Can’t you see
that child’s not right?  
Leave him alone.”

The policemen,
they don’t want to mess
with Mrs. Goldsmith.

Bobby

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Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
1 posted 2007-05-18 03:44 PM


a very good story and a very good poem. Ho wintersting to write poem like this. I'll wait for the next one about them.

enjoyed

scarletbegonias
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since 2007-05-15
Posts 59

2 posted 2007-05-18 06:49 PM


its a very good story Robert... i love how it's written
please write more about Felix

Robert Jordan
Member
since 2007-02-07
Posts 392
Philadelphia Pa USA
3 posted 2007-05-18 11:31 PM


Drauntz,

Thanks for reading and the kind words.  Sally and Felix are coming right along.  The book should be done in a few years.

Scarletbegonias,

Thanks for the kind words.  There are several other poems about Felix and Sally on this site.  Just do a search for “Felix”.

Bobby


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