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MindBodySoul
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since 2007-01-10
Posts 196
NJ

0 posted 2007-05-18 01:35 PM



    

What I needed
was to hear you say it
but the words
I never came to hear
There was just a void

feelings should be understood
felt without a word
Once in a blue moon
when you are feeling in the mood
they need to be said
as they need to be heard

I feel a little trapped
unspoken words of love
linger deep within
Great need to expressed
but afraid to be rejected

The sweetness of back then
I was being able to express
so peaceful was the feeling
to open up my soul
Sharing thoughts with you...
of how you made me feel

Sad to say
i can not do it now
Guard my words, I must
So I don't have to feel that void
of your unspoken words


Jen--->MindBodySoul

© Copyright 2007 Jeannette Urrego - All Rights Reserved
Drauntz
Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
1 posted 2007-05-18 03:42 PM


the self-guard is well spoken....after being hurt again and again.

very beautiful.

have a wonderful day, Jen.

yoshi_gurl
New Member
since 2007-05-18
Posts 3
Indiana
2 posted 2007-05-18 04:00 PM


Awww I know how you feel

love is so short and forgetting is so long...Xotchil-out

WindWalker
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since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218

3 posted 2007-05-23 12:20 PM


I like this, very beautiful indeed!!!!
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