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Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
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Los Angeles California

0 posted 2007-05-17 04:25 PM



Ah, sweet Liquidambar
Tell me why
You watched that kite flying
With your many eyes
All morning
After you stared at the moon floating
All night

© Copyright 2007 Drauntz - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

1 posted 2007-05-17 06:53 PM


that stuff is a heady muse--



I enjoyed this one too, and yep, been there, did that

(too many times)

Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
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2 posted 2007-05-17 06:56 PM


Love you Sb. You are the most smart one, dear.

have a nice day!

I am truly happy to have 2 cents from you. more please .Or you shall post more.

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
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3 posted 2007-05-17 07:05 PM


smile--

not so smart, D.

I didn't say I wouldn't do it again.

But hey? I am MINIMIZING.

The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
4 posted 2007-05-20 02:21 PM




ah such a mood you have painted here Drauntz

perfect for a sunday morning...

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07
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a 'Universalist' !
5 posted 2007-05-20 05:59 PM


interesting 'write'!

[enjoyed!!]

Kristabell
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since 2003-11-29
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Portland, OR
6 posted 2007-05-20 08:25 PM


This is eunique.

Much enjoyed,
Kristabell

"You are today where your thoughts have brought you; you will be tomorrow where your thoughts take you." James Lane Allen

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