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shirtless
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0 posted 2007-05-17 12:28 PM



IMPERMANENCE

it is a photograph
of me,
eight years old,
asleep
in the back seat
of my uncle’s car;
the moon
looks in
through the open window.

I’d been watching
the moon
as we failed
to outdistance it
as we sped
along
the nighttime
country road.

I would close my eyes
and say the alphabet,
open them
again
and again
to see
the legless moon
running
beside us;
somewhere
between A and Z
I fell asleep
and did not wake
until I was 56.

my uncle
is gone now;
the car
is rusting
into the earth
at the back
of the farm;
the photograph
is wrinkled,
slightly faded,
and I only believe
that the boy
is the seed
of me
when I look
at the sky
through my bedroom window
and see
that the moon
looks older too.

© Copyright 2007 Anthony Armstrong - All Rights Reserved
LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2007-05-17 12:36 PM


great to see you posting again...enjoyed this a lot, bringing me back, back, back to those wonderful times of childhood...

thank you

ladylisa
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since 2007-04-29
Posts 342
Florida USA
2 posted 2007-05-17 02:26 PM


Wow!! I loved this poem.  I have spent many nights gazing at that same moon.  Takes me right to it again.  lis
Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
3 posted 2007-05-17 02:46 PM


though sad about aging but it is beautiful one.

56 is still a very young age, much younger than moon's. so can't sigh yet.

enjoyed

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