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The_Nameless_One
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since 2007-01-20
Posts 165
Missouri

0 posted 2007-05-16 02:01 PM



Finally out of this "jail"
ready to go out into the world.
Will I make "bail"
or get thrown back into the pit.

I'm not sure how to go.
Find a job or another hell.
My mind begins to flow
ideas spring forth from nowhere.

I could go the scholarly course
using my mind to further my goals.
Or use my brute force
and be a mule for some rich guy.

No matter what I choose
I can never be fulfilled truly
My mind is warped and it skews
this way and that not knowing what to do.

I am just floating through
getting by just as best I can
Really I have no clue
no common sense in the end

© Copyright 2007 Preston Morse - All Rights Reserved
LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2007-05-16 02:15 PM


very thought provoking

adding...if you didn't possess common sense, you wouldn't be questioning.



scarletbegonias
Member
since 2007-05-15
Posts 59

2 posted 2007-05-16 02:28 PM


very thoughtful.. was the "jail" school?
best wishes for happiness and success, no matter what.
xoxox,
scarlet b.

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