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scarletbegonias
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since 2007-05-15
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0 posted 2007-05-15 02:15 AM



write me a poem about being alone
about being tired
and cold as stone

write me something that shows me inside
how deep you think
how well you can hide

write me about love lost
and how you do crave it
no matter the cost

write me and show me
how truly you trust
how broken is your heart
how primal your lust

write me something fast
before you forget it all
and present is past

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aziza
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
1 posted 2007-05-15 02:33 AM


Ah, darlin' dear ~

Welcome and I am so glad you came to join us in this very special place.  You are a wonderful friend -- and it's nice to see you and I am looking forward to reading more of your poetry.

Love you,
A

Ada'Do'Lis'Do'Ti
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germany
2 posted 2007-05-15 03:45 AM


Very Nice I enjoyed Your poem And look forward to more
divine chaos
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dancing 'neath the moon
3 posted 2007-05-15 07:52 AM


welcome to Pip, miss scarlet
I'm glad zi drug ya on over here
*grins* I'm waiting to see if she
brings everyone .. one at a time lol  

~Sheli~

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4 posted 2007-05-15 08:13 AM


ScarletB~
Welcome to our friendly Passion's circle~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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scarletbegonias
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since 2007-05-15
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5 posted 2007-05-15 09:44 AM


thank you <3 already i am addicted to reading through the poems and i just discovered how to reply.
thank you again <3


aziza
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
6 posted 2007-05-15 11:16 AM


You gotta admit, Sheli, I only drag the most cool!

xoxoxo
A

LeeJ
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7 posted 2007-05-15 12:13 PM


marvelous, loved the context...

Welcome

Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
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Los Angeles California
8 posted 2007-05-15 03:00 PM


I cry loudly at night
Does your heart hear?
I cry to the dark sky
Does your eye tear?
I hold so much love but they are not mine
I swallow so much sorrow that I can not bear

I move limbless
I smile lipless
I sing lifeless
I love heartless

This must be what you want
The words of the moon…..
********
your poem is wonderful. a beauty!

enjoyed


Krawdad
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9 posted 2007-05-15 03:25 PM


Welcome to da joint!

Nice first post!

Startime55
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Alberta, Canada
10 posted 2007-05-15 03:31 PM


A wonderful entrance...Welcome to the house of blue with the big heart...*Big Hugs*
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
11 posted 2007-05-15 05:34 PM


Welcome to Passions!

Please, check your email for a
Very Special Greeting!

" It matters not this distance now  " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

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