Stardust Souls and Moonbeams' Dreamy Flight

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secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

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a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2007-05-14 10:42 PM

                  Stardust Souls and
             Moonbeams’ Dreamy Flight

           When evening falls...
           and serenity wraps the mind,
           my heart and spirit dance
           to the soft, kind shadow-cadence
           of one tiny drum playing
           mid memory-echoes from
             the distant past,
          (As night-blossoms ripple
             in frost and smoky moonlight)
           I realize only then...
           that poets’ stardust souls and words
           cannot remain locked upon a page
          (never to tell a different tale);
           but shall instead
           ride articulate winds,
           forever transcending ‘place and time’
           with all cares lost
           to moonbeams’ dreamy flight!

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2007-05-14 11:17 PM

I love "articulate winds"
and "moonbeams’ dreamy flight!"
Another fine offering!

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

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Realms of Light

2 posted 2007-05-15 10:41 AM

" ride articulate winds,
forever transcending ‘place and time’"

~ as do your words, Dear Poet!!!

Linda

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

3 posted 2007-05-15 12:15 PM

   of one tiny drum playing
           mid memory-echoes from
             the distant past,

soft snow falling into the minds of men

   ride articulate winds,
           forever transcending ‘place and time’
           with all cares lost
           to moonbeams’ dreamy flight!

like an out of body experience...
true to it's owner....

fantastic articulation....

Startime55
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since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

4 posted 2007-05-15 03:29 PM

Ah yes, your words become whimsical as they create visions that are magic in their design...Beautiful writing...your words are filled with the magic of moonbeams...A delight to read...*Big Hugs*

ArtSolstice
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since 2007-03-18

Posts 498

5 posted 2007-05-15 05:19 PM

Oh, this is just magical!

Especially fine:
   ..."  to the soft, kind shadow-cadence
           of one tiny drum playing
           mid memory-echoes from
             the distant past,  "

          " I realize only then...
           that poets’ stardust souls and words"

          " ride articulate winds,
           forever transcending ‘place and time’ "

Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

6 posted 2007-05-15 06:41 PM

read serveral times.

another beautiful piece.

enjoyed

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

7 posted 2007-05-17 08:06 AM

ride articulate winds,
forever transcending ‘place and time’~Loved these lines!

And the whole poem was a treat!

~ARH

J. M. Barrie, the playwright, may have said it best when he wrote, “God gave us memories so that we might have roses in December.”

paullallady
Member

since 2007-04-03

Posts 262
Michigan

8 posted 2007-05-19 03:57 PM

what beautiful descriptive imagery you have written here. Beautiful.

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