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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2007-05-13 10:05 PM


China Girl Loud As Thunder

She had an I'll be your
best friend kind of face,
one that the bitter years
of Mao couldn't erase.
I told her I was James Dean.
She said, "Too bad,
he's dead it seems,
and walking the Great
Wall with him was
one of my dreams."
I told her that walking
the wall was my dream too,
could she find a place in
her heart to fit me into
her walking shoes.
China girl says
"Ssshhh, ssshh,
oh baby, just
shut your
mouth."

JamesLee
12May
2007
"Ssshhh, Oh baby,
just shut your mouth."
From the song China Girl
sung by David Bowie...



© Copyright 2007 JamesMichael - All Rights Reserved
aziza
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since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
1 posted 2007-05-13 10:40 PM


You make me smile, James.

A

Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
2 posted 2007-05-14 12:39 PM


How I loved this poem. make me laugh so loud.

thank you!!! what a treat for mother's day.


enjoyed as always.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2007-05-15 05:50 PM


Thank you aziza and Drauntz for the wonderful remarks...James
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