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"INDEEPENDIT"
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"INDEEPENDIT" |
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threadsofyou New Member
since 2007-05-01
Posts 3 |
can't take something you don't own can stay, but can't call this place home can get down deep, real deep inside cannot rack a doubting mind can't open up a trough or trench of faith even as you reach out & touch her face caresses only angled tears have not felt safe for many years slinking down these guarded halls cradled here, between insurmountable walls can't see you beyond this means once-in-awhile you foster dreams they fall to slumber with cease of day these too, have all been swept away open lips at times not giving mind cutting straight into the rind averted eyes, a slanted grin resounding hollowness within cannot feel something you don't know can say, but you've not seen this low one bid: a life...deceased a memory, now all in me a history that's solely mine every moment now, double-edged for me I can't stop the perpetual ticking cannot warm a soul so chilled cannot revive what has been killed can't cure this all by simple will can empty me, but cannot fill yes you can get down deep inside you can sleep here -for tonight. X- threads of you |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
excellent write could not highlight one I liked, as I loved every single line |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
very good. very touching. the feeling is so strong. I felt sad somehow. enjoyed |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Welcome to Passions |
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