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aziza
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

0 posted 2007-05-10 05:02 AM


When dusk of night gently covers us with illicit silence
And delectable dreams are captured in delicate nets
A magical harmony drifting in nocturnal song maze
A lyrical composition lilts high into mystical duet
A passionate desire meshes silver silk strands
Framing colored tapestry of woven threads
Plucked from pastel gauze of old pictures
Older faded photographs of sepia lives
Splattering a blinding colorful array
Chaos born in emotional confusion
Spawned by the clashing colors
Of an unfinished masterpiece
Framed by faith and hope
Brush strokes of love
Slowly completing
The picture of
Shared love
Between
You &
Me

...

Alison


© Copyright 2007 Alison - All Rights Reserved
LeeJ
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1 posted 2007-05-10 07:25 AM


Beautiful
LeeJ
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2 posted 2007-05-10 07:27 AM


Had to come back and say

Reminded me of Andrea Bocelli's Besame, Besame Mucho...
Kiss me, Kiss me a lot
as if tonight were the last night....

sighs

Exquisitly beautiful

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
3 posted 2007-05-10 10:46 AM


Alison!!! What a delicious feast for the heart and soul!

Truly, every line was a veritable treat! Descriptively delicious!

~ and your illustrious words hung down the 'blue wall', like a tapestry!

Thoroughly enjoyed!

Loving hug,

Linda

aziza
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
4 posted 2007-05-10 11:12 AM


You both are such wonderfully artistic ladies and I love your shared thoughts.  Thank you.

Alison

aziza
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
5 posted 2007-05-10 11:15 AM


And, Lee, you blew me away into a land of being rendered speechless.  As my friends will attest -- that rarely happens (smiles) --

"Had to come back and say

Reminded me of Andrea Bocelli's Besame, Besame Mucho...
Kiss me, Kiss me a lot
as if tonight were the last night...."

WOW!!!

deval
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since 2007-05-06
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6 posted 2007-05-10 01:04 PM


EMINENCE

From wide to narrow a heart touching Arrow

from hard surface to deep inside
emotions feelings and words together tied

really very nice

Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
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7 posted 2007-05-10 01:13 PM


very romantic. Very romantic.

enjoyed

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