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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Beautiful Lies I can not live on empty promises so unless you own the night don’t tell me about the moon “but I'm so hard to handle |
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oceanvu2 Senior Member
since 2007-02-24
Posts 1066Santa Monica, California, USA |
Hi, Slick Lady! Perfect poem, off-mark title. Best, Jim |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
wow,wow,wow, beauty, philosophy, reality, love ,desire, emotion all in 6 lines... 19 words. master piece. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
ouch! hard hitter and oh so good! |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Helen, Li Po Would have loved you John |
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deval Junior Member
since 2007-05-06
Posts 16 |
greaaaaaat..... soft words and hard intensity a full page of feelings in six lines |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is just beautiful. One I understand. I lived with empty promises for a long time. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I can not live on empty promises so unless you own the night don’t tell me about the moon loved this unless you own the night really really good missy enjoyed |
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Jenna Member
since 2007-03-20
Posts 180 |
Loved the title, Loved the poem |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Ah yes...James |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Oh wonderful. I love the bite. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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shirtless Member
since 2006-04-29
Posts 359 |
a smart and poetic write |
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MindBodySoul Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 196NJ |
How true and beautifully told... truly enjoyed! Jen--->MindBodySoul |
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thacuteone_09 New Member
since 2007-05-09
Posts 7 |
hon!! this poem is great! i am completely in awe about how this poem makes me feel... thank you so much |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Wow... absolutely fantastic!! |
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