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Open Poetry #40
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Savvy
Junior Member
since 2007-04-18
Posts 19
Washington State, USA

0 posted 2007-05-09 12:09 PM


Trust in me, I have my faults.
Trust in me, I have my deceit.
Trust in me, I have my demons.

Believe in me, I have my strength.
Believe in me, I have my hope.
Believe in me, I have my desire.

Trust in me, I will fail.
Trust in me, I will deceive.
Trust in me, I will dance in hell.

I know the road is rough,
but trust in me.
I know the road is bumpy,
but trust in me.
I know the road isn't enough,
but trust in me.

Trust in me,
to have the will to change.
Trust in me,
to have the strength to grow.
Trust in me,
to love you so.

© Copyright 2007 Kellie M. Cantrell - All Rights Reserved
Drauntz
Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
1 posted 2007-05-09 12:20 PM


the voice is very loud but the truth lays silent between the lines.  people trust the truth but not the human who speaks it. strange??

we have no trust.

enjoyed you powerful poem.


LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

2 posted 2007-05-09 06:51 AM


Trust in me,
to have the will to change.
Trust in me,
to have the strength to grow.
Trust in me,
to love you so.

this was a lovely poem...

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