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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2007-05-08 10:16 AM


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Lovers Tie

Shimmers in the bright of light
Whispers in the dark of night
Visions of a worthy goal
Tremors of a loving soul

Touches of a passions lot
Tying of a lovers knot
Opening the secret door
Looking at forever more

Declarations of declare
Vows implied in open air
Promising a hearts endure
Honoring a pledged amour

Pressure makes the circle bend
Bending it from end to end
And when the harmony is done
The two of them become as one

This is the way of lovers vie
This is the way of lovers tie.


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LeeJ
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1 posted 2007-05-08 10:19 AM


yes, looking at forever more...always and forever...

loved this Sy...delightful and whimsical

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2 posted 2007-05-08 10:52 AM


Seymour~

'Pressure makes the circle bend
Bending it from end to end
And when the harmony is done
The two of them become as one'


Blows my math teachings ...
Two makes One .. boy, would my high school math teacher have had a hard time computing this one~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2007-05-08 11:01 AM


LeeJ
Thank you sweetie.

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2007-05-08 11:02 AM


Marge,
It's just a different math. LOL

Earth Angel
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5 posted 2007-05-08 11:22 AM


Gooood morning, T-Man!

May your lover's knot last forever more!

~ and may you never lose those touches of passion in the night!

Loves 'n hugs,

EA

SmartChick
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6 posted 2007-05-08 11:28 AM


I love this Seymour. This is just beautiful.
Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2007-05-08 12:43 PM


Earth Angel
And this coming from an angel.

Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 2007-05-08 12:44 PM


SmartChick
Thank you dear.

Drauntz
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9 posted 2007-05-08 12:58 PM


what a beautiful poem of love! Sir, it must be your summary of your life. you are soooo very romantic!!!

life is beautiful!!!! esp yours.


have a wonderful day, Sir Tabin.

Earth Angel
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10 posted 2007-05-08 01:09 PM


lol @ your reply to mine!

But of course! Touches of passions can be heavenly!

Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 2007-05-08 05:47 PM


Drauntz
Thank you so much for the kind comment.

Seymour Tabin
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12 posted 2007-05-08 05:49 PM


Earth Angel
I'll have to remember that.

The Lady
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13 posted 2007-05-08 11:29 PM




"And when the harmony is done
The two of them become as one"

delightful Sir Sy!

Seymour Tabin
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14 posted 2007-05-08 11:31 PM


Lady
Thank you for the read and reply.

JamesMichael
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15 posted 2007-05-11 05:56 PM


Excellent...James
Seymour Tabin
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16 posted 2007-05-11 07:22 PM


James,
Thank you for the read and lovely comment.

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