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Drauntz
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0 posted 2007-05-07 02:15 PM



The sea lays in quiet azure,
The boat is in silent cruising
The air is still
The hill beams verdant green
The birds steal my kisses
And the scent of rainbow
Caresses me thoroughly  
on  my skin

When you pass by,
Pray, not to drop a pebble in.  


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aziza
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
1 posted 2007-05-07 02:52 PM


Lovely images

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The_Nameless_One
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2 posted 2007-05-07 03:46 PM


vivid imagery lays out a very beautiful scene
very nice write

passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2007-05-07 08:57 PM


now this is gorgeous!
Startime55
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4 posted 2007-05-07 11:01 PM


The vision and feel of this poem is filled with so much serenity that I just closed my eyes and let myself feel it...BRAVO!!...well done...*Big Hugs*
iliana
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5 posted 2007-05-08 12:45 PM


Can just imagine!  Enjoyed this.
LeeJ
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6 posted 2007-05-08 09:40 AM


oh how I felt this...simply lovely
JamesMichael
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7 posted 2007-05-08 07:39 PM


Silky...James
The Lady
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8 posted 2007-05-09 12:12 PM




such peace and beauty
let not a pebble disturb...

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