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anam_cara76
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since 2007-05-06
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0 posted 2007-05-07 12:28 PM



Moments of Fun

I have nothing left to offer us
I gave it all and tried to trust.
You don't even seem to care
Discussing this you wouldn't dare.
You'd rather sit and watch tv
Than try to save you and me.
Only nineteen she’s so young,
Naïve and free she must be fun.
Someday you’ll see all you’ve lost
The moments of fun at such high cost.
Even then I’ll caress your face,
Smile at you with a warm embrace.
But it will be different and you will know
That I am your friend not lover or foe.
I loved you too deeply you’ll then see
Sometimes things aren’t meant to be.
Forever lost our dreams of bliss
All because you chose to have that kiss.
By that time I’ll have someone new
Who I can count on, whose love is true.

© Copyright 2007 Nysa R. Smith - All Rights Reserved
aziza
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since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
1 posted 2007-05-07 01:08 AM


You know, I am exceptionally proud of you.
And I love your writing.
And it's so cool that writing is what made us friends
and here we are now.

It's like that full circle kind of thing.

Always your friend
me

Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores
2 posted 2007-05-07 08:17 AM


Nysa~
Welcome to PiP~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -             noles1@totcon.com

anam_cara76
Junior Member
since 2007-05-06
Posts 24
USA
3 posted 2007-05-07 06:42 PM


aziza, you know i love you and always hold our friendship dear to my heart.  Thank you so much for reading!

Nysa


anam_cara76
Junior Member
since 2007-05-06
Posts 24
USA
4 posted 2007-05-07 06:43 PM


Thank you Marge!  It's nice to find somewhere like this

always,
Nysa

divine chaos
Senior Member
since 2006-07-09
Posts 617
dancing 'neath the moon
5 posted 2007-05-08 09:44 AM


welcome to PiP, Nysa   

I'm glad zi drug ya on over here *grins*
(and I like the name, I think you were
right not to take zi's name suggestion lol)

anam_cara76
Junior Member
since 2007-05-06
Posts 24
USA
6 posted 2007-05-08 04:53 PM


Thanks much chaos! I really like it here...
(and yeah, a's name request is more than my slow thinker can travel just now.  i need to follow the kiss rule)

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !
7 posted 2007-05-09 02:02 PM


fine 1st 'write'!

From 'chaos' was born all the grand 'order'
(fascinating structure and 'complexity') that
has evolved in this infinetly nested and
wonderously 'interconnected' web of
scintillating potentialities that is our Universe!
[including, of course, members of the genus/species
homo sapien (perhaps the most complex of 'possibilities'
in the cosmos...and, often (in simultaneity) the most
inherently 'chaotic' as well!)]

a very warm welcome to 'P.I.P.'!

---Bruce [Universalist and 'Complexity'
               Scientist; Natural Philosoper/
                environmentalist (and poet?!)]

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown
8 posted 2007-05-09 02:19 PM


Welcome to Pip! I can sure relate to the feelings here. More than you know.
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
9 posted 2007-05-11 05:58 PM


Nice...James
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