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Future Kisses

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Grinch
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0 posted 05-06-2007 06:52 PM       View Profile for Grinch   Email Grinch   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Grinch


Iíve seen the future in my madness
Dance its fingers through my hair
Drag me to the edge of never
And hold me screaming there.

All the faceless ghosts of maybe
Cracking smiles into a frown
Draw me closer to forever
Then slowly drag me down.

Today is raining on tomorrow
See the droplets in my eyes?
Glistening they spell my fortune
Who'll kiss them into lies?

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aziza
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1 posted 05-06-2007 07:16 PM       View Profile for aziza   Email aziza   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for aziza

I can't single out one or two lines gripped me.  They all held me hostage to your poem.

Wow.

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Drauntz
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since 03-16-2007
Posts 2907
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2 posted 05-06-2007 08:54 PM       View Profile for Drauntz   Email Drauntz   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Drauntz

love, let the love out. mad but madly in love.
cool down. is she the right girl?

enjoyed.
Pilgrimage
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3 posted 05-08-2007 05:09 PM       View Profile for Pilgrimage   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pilgrimage

Oh I do like the images in this one.  And unlike my stuff, which does one image and then embroiders on it, you do image,image,image; and then your language is evocative and spare, also.  Very well done.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

TomMark
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4 posted 01-07-2008 12:44 AM       View Profile for TomMark   Email TomMark   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for TomMark

sad!!! again.
 
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