The 'Perfect' Poem (tanka)

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The 'Perfect' Poem (tanka)

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

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a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2007-05-06 09:34 AM

The ‘Perfect’ Poem (Tanka)

The ‘perfect’ poem
would sing of immortal love
in grand-lucid rhyme...
forever humbling the sun
upon the first blush of Spring!

paullallady
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since 2007-04-03

Posts 262
Michigan

1 posted 2007-05-06 10:15 AM

ahhh, the perfect poem. You are right, that is what it would do, and we constantly seek that Perfect Poem.

ArtSolstice
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since 2007-03-18

Posts 498

2 posted 2007-05-06 12:28 PM

Charmingly said, handsomely crafted, and true!

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

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Eternity

3 posted 2007-05-06 02:03 PM

Another beauty! Well yes, love is magical!

Love,
Margherita

Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

4 posted 2007-05-06 10:08 PM

oh, here you are talking about the true poem.
the love, the emotion and the rhyme and the feelings.

beautiful

enjoyed.

aziza
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since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

5 posted 2007-05-07 03:19 PM

You know, You make me smile.
I love this poem
Yep, I really do.

A

The_Nameless_One
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since 2007-01-20

Posts 165
Missouri

6 posted 2007-05-07 03:39 PM

true very true
nice one

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