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Love Senryu (# 2)

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

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a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2007-05-06 09:29 AM

Love Senryu II

Time shall never steal
my heart’s enchanted dreams of
transcendental Love!

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2007-05-06 09:32 AM

secondhanddreampoet,
Times pretty tricky. LOL

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2007-05-06 10:40 AM

as long as you don't turn your back, I suppose

ArtSolstice
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since 2007-03-18

Posts 498

3 posted 2007-05-06 12:12 PM

Delightful thoughts of idealism in an imperfect world -- one that does not necessarily reward those who have values and a good heart. Well done, Poet!

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2007-05-06 02:00 PM

No, it will not! For it does not exist.

How could it affect transcendental Love?

Again, you have written a piece totally after my own heart.

Love,
Margherita

Robert Jordan
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since 2007-02-07

Posts 392
Philadelphia Pa USA

5 posted 2007-05-06 03:18 PM

Secondhanddreampoet,

This is okay. Why are you capitalizing "Love"?

Bobby

Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

6 posted 2007-05-06 09:59 PM

another wonderful piece of love pome.

As love as heart, as heart as love.

enjoyed

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