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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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0 posted 2007-05-04 10:47 PM


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In the end
I’ll draw a whole—
And jump in


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Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
1 posted 2007-05-04 11:31 PM


1.well dry.  then "I" is silly.
2. heart.    then "I" is dreaming
3.breath.  then "I" is diving.

in 2600, anything "I" draw, robot will make a whole true thing for "I", so there will be other explanations. can't tell yet.

hope you do not dream bad!

have a good night, Sir Yi Huan

Robert Jordan
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since 2007-02-07
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2 posted 2007-05-05 07:26 AM


Huan Yi,

What an excellent idea.  Nice poem too.

Bobby

Drauntz
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3 posted 2007-05-05 11:21 AM


"what's going on with that boy, I wonder"

Aunt Polly.

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