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SPIRIT
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since 2002-12-29
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0 posted 2007-05-04 04:42 PM



RESTORATION

It was with standoffishness,
An immature arrogance
That I thought
I had not the need,
And I became wind-swept
Across the barren land of non-belief.

But with my faith redundant
I...a mere mortal
Lost my way,
And even to myself
Became nothing but an unknown.

I have so sorely missed
Having Him to thank
And to talk to.
So many memories
Of Him carrying me
When I was too weak to walk.
I must convert
Look deep within myself
And become again
A child of God.

I stand here
Upon a hill of green
In the shadow
Of a rugged cross,
And I mingle
With others who have a need,
For restoration.

© Copyright 2007 das - All Rights Reserved
Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
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1 posted 2007-05-04 09:56 PM


i read several time of this poems. So I have to leave my finger print.

it is a very good one. esp for a sensitive heart who wants to be a better, stronger person.

I love this one.

Stephanos
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2 posted 2007-05-08 01:29 AM


This is beautiful.


What did you mean by "faith redundant"?  

I see something in that, and was wondering if it's what you intended.


Stephen.

SPIRIT
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3 posted 2007-05-08 02:20 AM


Thank you for reading me...it is appreciated.

Faith Redundant: dismissed, not needed, laid off

Diinah

Margherita
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4 posted 2007-05-08 08:19 AM


Very significant write, dear SPIRIT! Though you have always been and always will be a child of God, it’s your awareness of this wonderful truth that is happily restored.

Enjoyed! Many may relate to what you convey so beautifully.

Love,
Margherita

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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5 posted 2007-05-08 09:33 AM


Loved the last lines...
and yes, we do most certainly mingle
like the Bible says
Birds of a Feather
is so so true

this was tolerant and understanding, yet the pain was most evident within the lessons learned.

hugs

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