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Open Poetry #40

Addiction

SPIRIT
Senior Member

since 2002-12-29

Posts 1745
California Desert

0 posted 2007-05-04 01:18 PM

Addictions

There are nights
when I wrap myself
in memories
of what was,
and once again
can feel our bodies
entwined,
until we have
no beginning
…and no end.

You are
my addiction,
my drug of choice,
a close to lifelong habit
that I am unable to break.
I am a prisoner
of this compulsion
that has held me bound
within the walls
of a lonely cell.

I have no regrets,
you are a mere phantom
of all that is past,
and yet
there are nights
when I wrap myself
in memories
of what was,
and once again
can feel our bodies
entwined,
until we have
no beginning
…and no end.

[This message has been edited by SPIRIT (05-04-2007 04:35 PM).]

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

1 posted 2007-05-05 11:26 AM

very romantic. what a lonely heart cry for love!!! beautiful.

Jenna
Member

since 2007-03-20

Posts 180

2 posted 2007-05-05 03:49 PM

Amazingly beautiful. Could feel the pain and longing in this.

Well done, excellent write.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2007-05-08 07:41 PM

Nice writing...James

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